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It was a cold dark night again in Prague, and the winding
streets had long been deserted. A few
lights flickered faintly in windows, but chilly air kept them shut and only the
barking of dogs disturbed the otherwise peaceful scene. In a three-story house, in the top floor, one
room shone brighter than the rest. Rabbi
Loew was up late again, as was his habit.
He was regarded with a mixture of fear, respect, and admiration among
the local population. Some thought he
was a crazy old man, others suspected he was a wizard, while others saw him as
a wise and powerful Rabbi. Mostly, he
kept to himself though, trying not to disturb anyone, but the flashing lights
and loud bangs that often emanated from his attic would sometimes cause the
more ignorant neighbors to complain.
Rabbi Loew had lived alone for some time now and his
physical frame was not as strong as it used to be, though his mind was as sharp
as ever. Tasks like hauling water and
firewood up the narrow stairwell quickly tired him and his back ached
constantly. He thought to himself that
it would be nice to have some kind of servant, but he did not have the funds to
pay for a young helper. He went back to
his extensive library and began to peruse some of the older chapters in a
darkly bound ancient leather tome. He
had often thought about trying some of the things written in the book, but had
never dared to try those experiments.
In the faint candlelight, he began to shape the clay, wood,
and metal parts until it began to resemble a large man. He thought he would make it as large as
possible, in order to be strong enough to work tirelessly throughout the entire
day. The man labored tirelessly, driven
by that strange mixture of curiosity, excitement, and fear. Never before (to his knowledge at least) had
anyone actually attempted the dangerous rituals necessary to create a golem.
By mid-afternoon the next day, his work was nearly complete. He took the sacred scroll which would give
life to his creation and paused before inserting it into its mouth. He wondered if it was truly the right thing
to do, if giving life to such a creature would be ethical. But his aching back and empty stomach quickly
persuaded him to go through with the motion and as soon as the holy word
touched the mouth of the golem, it sprang to life and bowed down in front of
him.
He jumped for joy and quickly gave his new servant
instructions for drawing water, starting the fire, and chopping wood. He figured that all of the neglected chores
would occupy the golem for long enough for Loew to get a good night’s rest.
Screams and shouting interrupted the night and Rabbi Loew
rushed outside. The heathen soldiers
were attacking the Jewish quarter! He
remembered his golem and called out to it, ordering it to defend his
people. The golem sprang into action
immediately, and quickly began to destroy the enemies. He watched first in relief and then growing
horror as the golem killed man after man, without ever being hurt. Eventually the killing stopped, but dozens of
men lay dead in the streets. Horrified,
the Rabbi resolved to never use the Golem again, and removed the holy scroll
from its mouth. He dismantled and hid
his creation, but legend says that if it were ever to be needed again, the
magic would still function.
Author’s Note: I based this loosely off the story of the
Golem in classical Jewish mythology, but I wanted a story where the golem
actually saved the Jewish people, instead of dealing with the moral quandaries
of creation of life. I liked the idea of
a golem actually saving the people, instead of creating problems for its owner,
so I rewrote the story how I wanted it.
Source: Story source: Jewish Fairy Tales and Legends by Gertrude Landa (1919).
Hi Blake! I thought the pacing of your story really jumped to life when the golem came to life — there was the slow build up as the Rabbi was creating the golem, but as soon as the holy scroll touched its mouth, the story took on new speed, which I thought was really cool. When you said the Rabbi watched in horror after the golem killed off the soldiers attacking the Jewish people, I was a little confused — was he happy that he had saved Jewish people, or was he disturbed that he had created something capable of ending human lives? Maybe you could include a bit more background for how the Rabbi was feeling in that moment. The beginning of your story had a lot of detail, which I thought made the story very interesting. What if you included more detail about how the Rabbi dismantled the golem at the end of the story and talked about where he hid it away?
ReplyDeleteHi Blake! Great story, it was a good read. From what I know about golems you followed the lore very well. I like how you made the golem the good guy, as I have always view golems as neutral, since they only do what they are commanded. Did the original myth say that they made the golem to be a servant? I didn't know that part, it provides an interesting twist to an innocent idea to avoid work.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your story for this week! I enjoyed the imagery the most because your word choice made the scene very vivid. I also liked how the setting was so calm in the beginning, but then slowly progressed into a serious tone. I think you did a great job in making this story your own. I also liked how the golem was good, and not bad. Nice twist.
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